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6/9/03
Back In Time

I wish I could go back to a time
When our love was real and genuine, and nothing was fake.
Where I could safely take your hand in my own;
  my heart as well.
I guess the yearning to be close all those years,
  ended up in heartbreak.
(Yet again)

I wish I could go back to a time
When Trust was reflected in our eyes and words.
Where we were standing in a crowded hallway
  but believed we were alone.
I suppose I'm standing by myself now.
(Alone again.)

I wish I could go back to a time
When a soft word washed away our pain.
Where you were the Warrior slaying the Demons
  to rescue the Princess.
I believe I woke up from my fantasy.
(Why now?)

I wish I could go back to a time
Where I was your Lady, you were my Lord.
Where we stood side by side
  and endured.
I think the Queen is gone.
(Has she lost her head?)

I wish I could go back to a time
Where we were both winners in our eyes.
When our faults never mattered, were just comedy.
I have lost this cruel game.
(Lost innocence)

I wish I could go back to a time
Where true love never has to end.
When we were on the dance floor
  with all eyes staring; ignore them.
I know my heart doesn't lie.
(Broken heart)

I wish I could go back to a time
Where we had our first kiss.
When I told you that I loved you
  and you didn't shrink away.
Yesterday, I gave you my last embrace.
(My Love.)

Tiana-Hime ^_^
©2004-2009 ~Brockiepoo15
:iconbrockiepoo15:

Author's Comments

Dont know what influenced me to write this. My penpal showed me a quote once and i remembered it (but it wasnt the full thing.. o.0) lol and i decided to go upon that. then she showed it to me again after i gave her this poem. lol.
the closest that it is to the quote is found in the 2nd to last stanza. or somerthing heh. ^_^

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:iconunit0822goldmember:
i love this piece b/c it reminds me of me and my girlfriend three weeks ago. I like the way you feel that it involves you and you know whats happining even though you don't. It has a sense of beauty to it so i say keep this poem in your mind b/c this may inspire you to write even more incredible things. This is one of those poems i will always remember and im happy you posted it b/c i was able to read it so thanx.

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Attention everyone... Jesus was black, Ronald Reagon was the devil and the government is lying to you about 9-11. Have a good day.
:iconbrockiepoo15:
Thank you.. .so, so much. ^_^ I feel that it is one of my best poems actually. It makes me think of a lot of things now when I read it, and the people who are close to me. ^^ I am pleased it made you think of your g/f because.. I suppose it's talking about being with the ones you love.. and keeping them close ^^ hehe well, im very glad i posted it now! so thank you!

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"Some things are better left seen and not read.. and some are better left to the imagination." -Van and I

*~"I believe in a madness called love..."~*
:iconunit0822goldmember:
thx for posting it and im happy that you feel better over the matter

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Attention everyone... Jesus was black, Ronald Reagon was the devil and the government is lying to you about 9-11. Have a good day.
:iconbrockiepoo15:
heh usually ^^ Sometimes it depicts what i'm feeling sometimes.. alot of my old poetry does that nowadays. ^^ and im very glad you enjoyed it.. check out some others if youd like >3 lol

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"Some things are better left seen and not read.. and some are better left to the imagination." -Van and I

*~"I believe in a madness called love..."~*
:iconunit0822goldmember:
id like to read all of ur poetry, tell me when u get new or older poetry k?

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Attention everyone... Jesus was black, Ronald Reagon was the devil and the government is lying to you about 9-11. Have a good day.
:iconbrockiepoo15:
sure thing ^^ ill put one in now o_O ish icky though x.x

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"Some things are better left seen and not read.. and some are better left to the imagination." -Van and I

*~"I believe in a madness called love..."~*
:iconunit0822goldmember:
thx ill read them as soon as i can and by the way that one bout ur house was awesome

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Attention everyone... Jesus was black, Ronald Reagon was the devil and the government is lying to you about 9-11. Have a good day.
:iconbrockiepoo15:
*blink* what one? ^^''

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"Some things are better left seen and not read.. and some are better left to the imagination." -Van and I

*~"I believe in a madness called love..."~*
:iconunit0822goldmember:
.........i forgot lol

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Attention everyone... Jesus was black, Ronald Reagon was the devil and the government is lying to you about 9-11. Have a good day.

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